Itch! Entire world gone mad? Baby boy today, tomorrow it might be a girl! Black is white; white black.
“There shall be a time when they will not endure sound doctrine; according to their desires, they will heap themselves, teachers, having itching ears:” [2 Timothy 4:3]
I would love to make a comment but I do not see your quadrille.
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I consider myself in a learning process, please consider your critic as a welcome.
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I love to read the poems from prompts as they are all different. I liked the quote from Timothy but….there was no 44 word quadrille, alas
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Oh I get it, I think! The quote from Timothy should not be part of the Quadrille, IS that it?
Thanks in advance!
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You are only one word shy, unless you count “Timothy.” Which I did. But then, I tend to err on the side of grace — you know, just in case One is looking on.
I also don’t sweat the small stuff. Nice write.
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My word counter did count Timothy, learn something daily around here. Loving it!
Thanks Charley!
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🙂 I am striving to learn the habit of smiling, nodding, and moving on without comment. It’s not taking yet.
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We have been counting Timothy for centuries, why stop now? Big picture, nice to have you on the quadrille trail. Nice poem.
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SMiLes.. Gentile.. Jew..
Servant or Free Woman and
or Man no More as it appears
the Good Cop Jesus
had
an
itch
for Everyone
at least in Fearless
Meek and Humble Ways..
i’m happy to see that Version
Most every Sunday in my Local
Version of a Catholic Church
it surely satisfies my only
Law and
PayGrade
of Love for
the Good Cop
Jesus Story liveS oN
as Love this way at most..:)
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Just coming back one more time to Applaud
Your Innovation Including a New
Testament Verse as
an Integral
PArt of
Your 44 Word
Quadrille.. Just another
Beauty of Difference.. my FriEnd..:)
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Thank you, now I feel better, LOL!
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SMiLes my Friend You Did JusT Fine..
Poetry is Most For heART ‘Verses’
Science BRain
dePending
on
wHeRe
LiFE comes From NoW..:)
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Desires lead to an itching that may never be resolved.
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I agree the world has gone mad ~ Thanks for joining us at dVerse and learning our writing challenge – Quadrille, for today.
For this poetry prompt, 44 words is the only challenge with a given word, which for this case is, itch ~ I normally use the wordcounter for this writing challenge: https://wordcounter.net/
I hope you visit and also read the poem of others – its part of our community spirit.
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So nice to have a newcomer at dVerse! Glad you found us 🙂 We are a global community of folks who enjoy writing and reading and learning too! We post prompts on Mondays (quadrille one Monday; Haibun the next); Tuesdays (called Poetics Tuesday — some varied and interesting prompts on these days); and Thursdays (alternate between an “open link” when you can post 1 poem of your choosing; and a day when a particular form is explored). I’ve been with dVerse for probably about 3 years and I never stop learning. So come back often! Write and be sure to read and comment too! 🙂
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You will never know how much I appreciate your kind words. Thank you!
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And that time seems to be now!!
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Yes, I agree, I wonder what comes next?
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