My post here is an acceptance of Colleen’s Challenge Tanka Poetry; her instruction is to use the synonyms for the words “Plan and Finish” the numerous synonyms are underlined.
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My Haibun and Haiku or Senyru below:
Most Sashay through life without giving little thought to the end.
Time, also known as the world; more than breath, less than an illusion.
God’s design is all in all. We desire yet wonder what we yearn.
Purpose of life be
Happy in eternity
Know Love and Serve God
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Ask, and it shall be given you:
seek, and you shall find:
knock, and it shall be opened to you.”
A splendid Haibun/Senryu poem! You are really expressing your feelings now. Well done. ❤
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Thank you, I still am having major issues with is it a Haiku or Senryu decisions.
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A Haiku is nature related. A senryu is more humorous with a bit of sarcasm at the end. https://colleenchesebro.com/how-to-write-a-senyru-poem-in-english/. Some are a real blend of Haiku or Senryu. Then, it is up to the poet to define their work. ❤
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We should be preparing our whole life for the end, without forgetting to live. Good Haibun/Senryu! 😀
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