My first attempt for dVerse at Rubaiyat which is a form of poetry.
Titled: Time; Your Gift
Our sashaying through viability
Little thought of essence, humility
Yet, pride leads the way to an illusion
Self-fulfilling to disability.
Near the end, its all about confusion
Wrought from competence to our delusion.
We cry out with great regret — life, time, gone!
Truth = what IS! God always the solution!
I Believe, BECAUSE - 
Yet, pride leads the way to an illusion – wonderful line!
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God is the only solution that needs no other. I like the line about regret.
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This was lovely.
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Yes to the concluding line.
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Pride is not only an illusion…. it’s a sin.
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I agree! Thanks for your comment!
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Profound message.
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LOVE your first line!
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Wonderful rhythm. (K)
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This is huge! Such truth, and your language reall emphasises!
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