For dVerse — Quadrille with the upshot of only 44 words.
Look UP! What do you see?
The top of my old pine tree.
Look UP higher — there goes a bee!
Watch out ♫ … it might try and sting thee!
What if you were one hundred and thirty-three?
Now that would make me quite heavenly!
Ha! Fun! I love this!
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Enjoyable silliness. Nice ending with being heavenly.
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Skippety skip, silly is good!
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I think of Winnie the Pooh… there must be honey up there.
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Seems I finally wrote something we can all agree on, “silly”
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I really enjoyed this one!! 😀
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Fun! And all the rhymes too.
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Welcome! What a fun poem 🙂
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