Added this to dVerse Open Link April 15 + Hope you like it!
THE challenge is to use synonyms only for the words
I tried two forms with the same theme; first, the butterfly cinquain a nine-line syllabic form with the pattern two, four, six, eight, two, eight, six, four, two. The second form is a traditional Haiku with the syllabic structure of 5-7-5
Seek find In God we trust It all depends on you A vast world today is absent wasted look around beyond the hidden See the invisible Explore you must Seek find ***************
Beyond the hidden Explore the invisible A world of absence Inspired by
Stunning, stunning execution of both the butterfly cinquain and haiku form! Yes, we must put our trust in God 🙂
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Thank you so much, I appreciate it!
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Myrna, these poems are wonderful. The last one is a senryu because you allude to human responses. Haiku is always nature-related. I really like the butterfly cinquain. Well done! ❤
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Thank you Colleen!
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You’re welcome. ❤️
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I just can’t resist a butterfly cinquain and haiku. Two of my favorite forms.
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I too enjoy the Butterfly, is that what they call shape poetry, not sure?
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Shape poetry comes in many forms. Butterfly cinquain is just one of them.
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